10 Pages Critique
$80 – Delivered in 3 Days
Make Your Opening Pages Compelling
The first 10 pages decide everything for a reader, agent, or editor. They either lean in or move on.
If you're not 100% sure your opening grabs attention, sets the tone, and makes people want more, I’ll show you exactly how to fix that. It also serves as a sample edit before you commit to a complete edit.
You’ll get clear, direct feedback on:
✔️ What’s landing and what’s falling flat
✔️ How to sharpen your hook and build momentum fast
✔️ Where the pacing, voice, or clarity could lose a reader
✔️ What to revise so readers (and agents) keep turning pages
What You Get
✔️ In-line comments with specific suggestions
✔️A short summary of key strengths and revision priorities
✔️Actionable edits rather than vague advice or sugarcoated notes
Start strong, stand out, and make those first 10 pages count.
Developmental Editing
Turn Your Draft into a Book That Actually Works
If you’ve got the draft, now it’s time to make sure it hits with clarity, structure, and purpose.
Developmental Editing shapes your raw material into something powerful and readable. I’ll help you figure out what’s working, what’s not, and exactly how to fix it.
Developmental Editing
Tighten the plot, deepen the characters, raise the stakes, and much more.
I’ll help you build a story that hooks readers, hits emotional beats, and delivers a satisfying arc from the first chapter to the final page.
For Nonfiction
Sharpen the message and make the argument stick.
I’ll help you organize your ideas, connect with your reader, and make your insights land.
Service Rate
The rates for all edits depend on the scope of the project. Contact me for pricing, or buy a 10-page critique to see needed revisions and the total project cost.
What You Get
Actionable inline comments that don’t just say what’s wrong, but how to fix it
A deep-dive editorial letter with clear next steps
A 60-minute strategy call so you leave with direction, not confusion
After a Developmental Edit, authors gain clarity on the necessary revisions and feel reinvigorated and excited to continue refining their work.
Line Editing
Make Every Line Count
If you’ve done the hard work of shaping your book, now let’s make sure every sentence flows, your voice comes through, and your ideas land the way you meant them to.
Think of it as tightening the screws before launch.
Service Rate
The rates for all edits depend on the scope of the project. Contact me for pricing, or buy a 10-page critique to see needed revisions and the total project cost.
What You Get
Sentence-level edits that smooth out awkward phrasing and uneven tone
Grammar, punctuation, and word choice fixes without losing your voice
Suggestions that enhance your style, not rewrite it
A clear path for any final tweaks
The rates for all edits depend on the scope of the project. You can contact me for a price or purchase the 10 Pages Critique, which will show you exactly what revisions are needed, and I can give you a price for the entire project.
If you're serious about publishing a sharp, well-structured, professional-quality book without wandering around in the dark, let’s talk. You’ll get honest, experienced feedback and a clear roadmap from messy draft to finished product.
